Tuesday, 31 May 2016

               Lost
On a nice sunny day at Ella and Emma’s Star stable Emma and Ella were going on a trek on their horses Ella’s horse is Rocky and Emma’s horse is Glitter. They were going on a picnic when they got there Emma and Ella tied their horses to a tree.

They began to unpack the picnic just at that moment the horses broke free they galloped down the path and went into the forest they didn’t know where they were going, They were totally completely LOST. Emma and Ella grabbed their horse’s lead rope and ran. The only thing they saw was that the horses went in different directions Glitter took the right path and Rocky took the left path. Emma shouted to Ella we aren’t going to manage finding our horses on feet they were going to have to go on horse back.

Ella and Emma ran back to the stables Emma would take Pipi and Ella would take Coby. Gitter and Rocky would have to stay in the forest for the night said Emma. The next day at five in the morning Emma and Ella started to get their horses ready. They got on and
cantered to where they had their picnic the other day. Emma and Ella went in different directions. After a while galloping down the track Emma and Ella both wondered where they were going. Finally the paths joined together and went into one. Emma and Ella were on the same path all along but they still haven’t found Rocky and Glitter....

They galloped in single file for what seemed to take forever. Then found themselves in a little paddock. They looked around and at the exact same time Emma and Ella saw that there was a little sandy path at the end of the paddock. Emma was the first one to make her move. She troted down the little sandy path. A few seconds ago she was in a little paddock not knowing what she was doing. But now she was on a fabulous beach Ella came over she looked stunned. Emma and Ella cantered down the beach and there they were Glitter and Rocky at the far end of the beach nibbling on long bits of grass Emma and Ella took their lead ropes and got their horses and went home they did not only find their horses they found their very own beach.

                               The end

                               By Emma

3 comments:

  1. that was a crazy story it was so long

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  2. What a lovely story emma. i love it. i like how one of the horses name was glitter and one pipi. cute names.

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  3. Awesome work Emma, I really like how you described everything very well. Keep up the amazing work, I really enjoyed reading this. KA PAI!!

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